Inside my Mind

by SuperJenius   Jul 19, 2005


If you look deep inside my mind
You will be frightened of what you find
A darkness that will soon consume my soul
Some thing that I can’t control

There was a voice in my head that stood as my defender
But now it’s faded to a distant whisper
This struggle for my soul I fear that I have lost
And it has left my heart covered in frost

There are days I wish things could just be Ok
And this game for my soul I would’t have to play
But the fact is there’s only darkness for me
This is not the person I wanted to be

There are things I have witnessed that have tore at my heart
They are the thing that have caused my life to fall apart
When the time comes and the darkness wins
I pray to the lord he’ll forgive my sins

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    Hmm, wow. I really liked this. It's deep and gets straight to the point. Great job. =)

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Sar

    I love the words you used in this poem and the ending is brilliant and sounds final. its awesome

    sarah xx

    thanks for your comment on mine

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem, the beginging pulls you in and the end is just brilliant.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mike

    ur poems rock .. they seriously !!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    The wording is very interesting, it made me give it a five. Good one!