Wow.... that's seriously all i can say. You're writing is so amazing. i wish i had your talent.

"Hope for such love" she said, "One day would thrill me.."
She continued and proclaimed, "But this vulnerability will kill me

You ended this poem perfectly. It is hard to go into a relationship and it give it your all, knowing that you are setting yourself up for heartbreak. My love and I have broken up, yet again, and this time I thought it was going to kill me. Take care and I hope all is well.