I LOVED IT!YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER

awww... its so touchin... but still sad... its like..the perfect mixx of emotions to make a really good poem...

thanx fer commentin on mineXD

~l3.R.0.l<.£.l\l.~

OMG got me in tears

omg great poem.. ur so talented pls check out my newest poem "help me" and let me know wat u think mwwaz stephy :):)

Excellent poem, you can really feel the words come to life.
If you got time, please check out some of mine. ;)

wow that's sad... great poem! it's very well written! good job and keep up the great work! 5/5

Awwl thats so sad.. I would just die if my baby died so young. But you had a great ending.. becuase what other way can they think of it! 5/5! great job!

awww thats soo sad!!!.....though i really luved the ending....u worte it very well!....Keep up da amazin work! NEVA STOP WRITIN.... lolz! excellent job!!! 5/5

well ne wayz g2g ttylz byez!xoxo
~Chica~

That is so sad, i am actually crying...it isn't true is it?

well written, i liked it. this sad story comes to a lot of people.

oh my gosh, that was so sad, what a wonderful wonderful poem. Great job!

Great poem... so sad and touching...
take care, xoxoxo

So sweet. I would cry, really, but I'm at school so I'm trying my hardest not to....

Great write.

Great poem... Touching... Great consistancy throughout and great ending... *goosebumps.* Keep up the great work and keep writing!

Beautiful poem, really sweet. i liked it alot.
Thanks for your comment on my poem 'Charmbracelet' i really appreciate it !

xxx cici xxx

Oh this is sad
but a great poem!!!

This is a very sad, cute, nice excellent, amazing poem...great job...5/5