Mommy’s Tears

by ---AL---   Jul 19, 2005


Mommy’s Tears

Here on shore I try to stand,
But all I do is sink in sand,
Trying hard to stop your tears,
Before you drown in lake of fears,
Spun by all the tears of pain,
For like clouds, your eyes still rain,
But I still sink upon the sand,
For I am too young to understand,
For I’m but ten with mind at lost,
Confused to think I’m mommy’s tossed,
Standing on shore to watch you drown,
I don’t know why, you just broke down,
I think it was because of me,
For Daddy left in misery,
So maybe if I wasn’t born
Mommy wouldn’t tear and mourn,
And now I try to be so strong,
To fix the things that I did wrong.

“I’m sorry mom for being born,
If only you were both forlorn,
Then Maybe dad could still be here,
To catch your tears and hold you dear,
But gone he is because of me,
For what other reason could it be?”

*** I wrote this poem to show how often kids blame themselves for the seperation of their parents, and how the parents should really do their best to help them understand what is going on, why it is, and whose fault it isn't.*** I hope you enjoyed reading it!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    You're right... its not your fault... its never the child's fault.. i know its hard.. my parents are divorced too.

    if you ever need anyone to listen, i will always be here for you.

    lots of love & hugs, always,

    michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    5/5. Thats poems it so true. Parents are often to caught up in their world and things that they don't take the time to really think how effecting the kid and to talk to them about whats going on...I really liked this poem..I think you said what needed to be said

  • 19 years ago

    by kate

    Omg the poem is soooooooooooo kool but sad but excellant it flows so well and i like it lots well done excellant work

  • 19 years ago

    by RachelAnne

    my parents tell me that i was an accident so im pretty much to blame!
    -Rachel 5/5 anyways

  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    i enjoyed reading it.. i loved the rhythm and it had gr8 flow.. its so true how children blame themselves 4 a lot of things that happen around them.. i hope evry parent who reads this thinks bak 2 their kid/s and c wat they can do.. gr8 message
    keep writing
    nouna

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