awwwww im sry girl. i loved the poem its great you keep up the good wrk 5/5

Very Very very sad poem , i can kind of relate, because my father is never around, ever since i can remember, my father has not once beeen here for me and my mum left me when i was 3 so really in my life ive had no-one and its affected my life so much.
Ashleigh, keep your head up,and im sorry you have to go through this pain, i look forward to reading more of your poems as ive enjoyed this one alot.

that wuz so sad!!!!!!!!!!
i luved it though.........

Wow...............u know wut u really did a gd job and i know where u r coming from.................hang in there and keep ur head up gurlie..........im in the same boat ............its ok we can be here for each other.............xoxoxoxoxo

oh my gosh.. your so riet.. i love this poem.. its soo good.. great job!

Ur like my twin cuz my dad is like that
its sad aint it ?
well i have poems bout my dad if u want to take a look
comment and vote please
i did for u !!

Im really sorry,.. i'd like to say i can relate, that because my parents were divorced, i am emphatic, but i dont think its the same.. plus i assume your parents arent divorced(for some reason) anyway.. i cant say anythings wrong with this at all.. passionate read, sadly.. i am sympathetic th0... i loved the way u wrote with the line breaks, the flow was great.. 5/5

I'm so sorry girl ! I can't understand how people can do this type of thing to their own flesh and blood .Keep your head up and walk tall ...Hugs !!!!

I feel ur pain..my father was the same way but i jus left it in the dark...good poem

:( i understand how you feel. I love this poem so much. All my life, i've felt like everything was my fault. That my dad left because of me. I dont know what to think any more. And to add to ur comment at the end, I have a step dad too. i love my step dad alot. but you're right...its like theres something still missing. its that void of not being wanted. i give u a 5.5 for this poem

Omg this is the shit...it made me cry!! the flow was very different but all the better....thats got to be very tough....good luck w/ everything 5/5

Omg this is so sad! but great poem 5/5
Becky
xoxo

This is so sad, i dont know how you feel but this poem really got me to understand how you felt, great job, once again sorry this happened way to go for being able to write it down

Wow this really brought up emotion, and I can relate, my situation was a little more complicate, but this really brought tears to my eyes, Its satnzas were a little confusing so I am going to rate 4/5.