Let me Keep you

by Bredada   Jul 20, 2005


Baby i live for you n only you
You make me smile n my eyes shine
But for some reason
I dont blieve your all mine
you dont return
The full attention i give u
U ignore me n take me for granted But still im stuck on you
Unable to be detached
I love you baby
N i always will
If you dont want me then why do you keep me?
Lead me to think that your into me
making me fall more and more in love
As the days pass by
I wish u felt the same for me

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  • 19 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    I really liked it! It was sweet!

  • 19 years ago

    by Arora

    awww, you can make it a song if it was alittle longer and had a chorus...... but it is good. 5/5 <3

  • 19 years ago

    by natalie

    I know the feeling, i really like the poem :)

  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    u used different style to express a thing that happens almost everyday.. so thumbs up 4 that. personally, i lyk those that rhyme, but this one was gr8, too...
    keep writing
    take care
    nouna

  • 19 years ago

    by Britney

    awwl thats really cute.. but sad.. I have been in that situation before so i know where your coming from its nice to read a poem that i can truly relate to. Loved it.. 5/5! :-)

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