Her trail of crimson red

by Iyla   Jul 20, 2005


Her footsteps silently crept
as she walked towards the door
her dark figure reached out helplessly
and touched the dried blood on the floor

The only mark there
that showed she was ever around
a soft trace of her crimson red trail
lay lightly on the ground

memories inside her haunted head
screaming for endless help
her broken soul wondered lifelessly
for a way to release herself

blood running furiously down
her porcelain white skin
there was no way
she could free her dieing pain within

her head burning for the thoughts
pain causing tears to fall from her eyes
she still stay lost, within herself
hoping her soul will no longer be alive

her eyes hide all the pain
in the depths of her soul
the blood on her torn paper skin burns
as her body grows cold

she gets up from the floor
slowly with her weakened knees
the dead girl starts to walk away
away from her memory's

her glistening teary eyes shine in the mirrors reflection
draped by her side her shredded black wings
she slowly walks down the hall
with a trail of crimson red, she painfully bleeds

* i'm writing a part 2*

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxCrimsonxSinxX

    Love this poem, its really great, alot better than n-e-thing ive written, keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Hey I recognize this poem from the club's website. I loved it... every part of it is great. I can't wait for a part 2! 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    It is clear that you are a very gifted writer. The story is so vivid in my mind, like actually being there.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Me

    wow deep and haunting my goodness it was amazing and dark! i no the feeling tho i loved the ending it was my fav part! ttyl kat

  • 19 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    well done hun once agen ... hehe ...
    i fink u shud take all ur poems and make a book u'd make trillions cuz they r soooooooooooo gooood

    :D
    keep smilin but dnt make it fake like mine:P

    -larochelle-