well done hun once agen ... hehe ...
i fink u shud take all ur poems and make a book u'd make trillions cuz they r soooooooooooo gooood

:D
keep smilin but dnt make it fake like mine:P

-larochelle-

wow deep and haunting my goodness it was amazing and dark! i no the feeling tho i loved the ending it was my fav part! ttyl kat

It is clear that you are a very gifted writer. The story is so vivid in my mind, like actually being there.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Hey I recognize this poem from the club's website. I loved it... every part of it is great. I can't wait for a part 2! 5/5

~ Tina

Love this poem, its really great, alot better than n-e-thing ive written, keep up the good work