very nice and heart felt

Aww, i am so sorry, this is a terrible story, but a very good poem. I feel terribly that you lsot your grandmother, in what seems to me a house fire? But anyway, you did an amasing job writting this.
Great work

--Steph

This is a lovely sweet tribute to your grandmother. For me personally it seemed a little abrupt but it is still well and lovingly written.

Oooh this one is about your grandmother soo sad i very sorry she is gone but in my opinion for me as a writer a poem being dedicated to me is so amazing i can tell all you did was love her
laura

Brings back memories about my nan and great uncle that have sadly passed but hope for my Grandad. I liked this and how you expressed your sadness. Good job, 5/5. Em x