So did she really find another....isn't that what you said you hope she didn't do....oh and there will be plenty more girls who will like you, and a lot of people are broken inside....newayz 5/5!!!!..gr8 poem!!!!

hey. ur a realli good writer i can relate to most of ur stuff cept im a girl hehe.but im here if u ever need to talk.love always xox

Hun, this is a great poem. but i believe that our relationships make us stronger, if we break up with someone its for a reason, and that if its meant to be itll happen. I dont belive that we should be scared of breakups cuz we learn something special from every person that we're with, that teaches us something about ourselves and can help future relationships. Besides when we find the 'one' it will all be worthwhile:) (sounds kinda cheesy but hey, im a cheesy girl haha) Great job though!