by Bryan Berry Jul 20, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Here you are |
by Ana Vidovic
Awesome! This one hit home with me! Love the message and the wording was perfect! Keep writing! |
Inspirational write, espacially because it shows the people hiding and looking away from causeless killing in a totally different light. I like the hopeless atmosphere you build up and the last stanza is my fave, strongly described and worth being the end of your poem. |