Comments : War

  • 19 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Inspirational write, espacially because it shows the people hiding and looking away from causeless killing in a totally different light. I like the hopeless atmosphere you build up and the last stanza is my fave, strongly described and worth being the end of your poem.

    Keep it up :-)
    Bye, Sabine

  • 19 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Awesome! This one hit home with me! Love the message and the wording was perfect! Keep writing!

    Ana*