I hope This Kills

by SuperJenius   Jul 20, 2005


You said you'd always be there , you said you'd always care

But when you pushed me , slapped and spit in my face I then knew that forever gone would be my state of grace

So on that night of pain and sorrow
I took out my best friend , the one that would be there until tomorrow

His name was Razor he helped me deal , although the cuts he caused did slowly heal

Cut after cut slowly did Razor deceive , for he did not reduce the pain that I did conceive

Not yet did I give in a few more cuts , this could not worsen my sin

So I did a few more , I did not stop until my cutting hand was sore

A stream of dark crimson slowly trickled down my arm , the tears on my face felt oh so warm

Again I was deceived though not by you , all this pain held within me ; I just could not cope , for my life and will to live were all twisted through my cosmic telescope

This pain was the only pain that I could control but no longer could I handle it's toll

So I reached for plan two , a bottle of pills and began to cogitate " I hope this kills "

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  • 17 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Now that i look back at it, that seems really emo...

  • 18 years ago

    by Cries at Night

    Thanks for the noises for my poem (which does not even come close to the standards you write in!) you have a very special gift.

  • 19 years ago

    by You Forgot Me

    That was a great poem! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Samey

    thats amazing! i love it! great job!!!

    thanx for the comment too! :)

    Samey

  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Thought your rhyme was confused and forced and didn't even flow or occur at times, but good poem all the same, keep it up
    Kt x