heyy people , thanx for reading my work leave comments

great poem. and thanks for the comment.
much love,
marjan

i dont usually go for the subject of suicide for poems,

but this had an awsome flow to it anyways

nice job<3

Pretty damn good...kept together pretty well...kepp it up eh??

--Nick--

I like it, the flow was different, which made it captivating. Hey if you ever need to talk, maybe I can relate, maybe not, but you can try me. Luv always, KT

A different style than what I've seen before. It was very cool though.
~FotF

Thought your rhyme was confused and forced and didn't even flow or occur at times, but good poem all the same, keep it up
Kt x

thats amazing! i love it! great job!!!

thanx for the comment too! :)

Samey

That was a great poem! 5/5

Thanks for the noises for my poem (which does not even come close to the standards you write in!) you have a very special gift.

Now that i look back at it, that seems really emo...