I think this is how my life would end...

well i dont know you very well but i wish this is not how your life is gonna end and not every thing you write has to be from your nightmare it could be from i dont know when you are awake and like cheer up some one out there cares trust me you're like what 14 now i do write sad poems but i am just really moody i write sad poems not cuz i dreamed them up i write them when im pissed it blow off some of my temper off and well i am not making fun of you so don't take it the wrong way but you know you can't be sad for ever now can you. your like 14 you have a whole life ahead cheer up have fun live a little before you go kill your self and if you do try and use a gun becuz you die more quickly and when a knife you just die so slowly and i just cant take the pain not like i am telling you to kill your self or anything well i know your now gonna die this way

"well i dont know you very well but i wish this is not how your life is gonna end and not every thing you write has to be from your nightmare it could be from i dont know when you are awake and like cheer up some one out there cares trust me you're like what 14 now i do write sad poems but i am just really moody i write sad poems not cuz i dreamed them up i write them when im pissed it blow off some of my temper off and well i am not making fun of you so don't take it the wrong way but you know you can't be sad for ever now can you. your like 14 you have a whole life ahead cheer up have fun live a little before you go kill your self and if you do try and use a gun becuz you die more quickly and when a knife you just die so slowly and i just cant take the pain not like i am telling you to kill your self or anything well i know your now gonna die this way "
-Sandy...U know...ur absoltly correct! I'm already going through an enlightentment for poetry in life. Also, I might not submit any poems in a couple of days or so. But I will think of it. Thanks! Your a lifesaver!

BTW: what did u think of the poem?

hey, my fave bit was -for now
...I mourn... for myself,
all alone... to mourn... to myself,

v. good. lv A, x

That is so heartbreaking...I liked the begininng, but it becomes so incredibly sad and....if you truly feel this way...I don't know how much was for dramatic effect or anything...well just don't go doing something like that, please. And besides, using a gun wouldn't be good either...to o.d. would be less painful wouldn't it? Don't do that either though!! No encouragment for any way of taking your own life! None whatsoever. Okay?

Despite the gloominess...you did a great job with the poem...well written.

xxxxx

opps...srry about that...

i love it

Ahh, one of the best. Never forget all the heartless souls who have carved out their hearts a million times. WE, being a few of them.

Hey michael, that was so sad and touching. if you have the time, please
read my poem"why so sad?"
wish you happiness,
marjan

Wow. this poem is awesome. i read some others but didnt have time ot comment. Your poetry rocks!

~Anthony

If i can, i will be there for you...stay strong man...bless you.