Hey that one was really great! I loved it and it was awesome how you turned it around in the end! u did a real great job! Keep up the great work.

Good poem.

Cute poem! The beginning had a bit of humor. I wasn't expecting the ending! Good job! ~Brooke~

Thats nice.It is really sweet.keep up the good work.

This one is awesome, i love the repeat of the intro that led to the outro that kept a nice pattern. love it 5/5