thanx again! lol

-this is a good poem - i like it - i know exactly how you feel - good work :) -
xoxoxoxoxox
-Viv-

thanks everyone for commenting

hey.. nice one.. i wudv lykd it betta if u wudve written some more n elaborated.. but its still gud..
keep it up
take care

If i had elaborated it would have been a different poem. I wanted it that way, but thank you for the suggestion because i may decide to elaborate more next time = )