WOW!!!!!! this is an amazing poem. it doesnt rhyme but its just as good, if not better than a rhyming poem. i love it! very unuasual aswell. has moral meaning behind it. i like that. VERY good poem!

thank u very much = ) i don't try particularly to make my poems rhyme, it's just not what I do, i like to just get my feeling down in an artistic and flowing way.. Thanx = )

^ As do I...no need for all the rhyming as long as it flows well enough...

Lovely poem...very descriptive/creative and meaningful.

xxx

excellent

excellent

thanx everyone for commenting and voting