interesting.... really. don't really know what to say but it's different from what i'm used to reading but it was good.

Great poem! Left me pondering for a while, and left a great image in my mind, of trying to fit in, but cant fit in like another brick in the wall... Im relating to; "Once the makeup is washed away
Her features remain on her pale, pink face
She cannot be erased
She is not erasable,
As she wishes".... Not sure if that was what you meant by the poem, but anyhow, i thought it was excellent. Kind regards from Kane

This poem is very moving and I feel as if i can relate greatly to what your saying. Keep writin 5/5

*~JAMIE~*

yes this was a very interesting poem and I liked it this is a great peice of work!

-Josiah