Hehe... Astonishing Poem.. The metaphorical meaning to this poem is excellent! The way you ask where the line is, from moving from teenager to Adult. The one you "shouldnt cross yet" Because you are still to young, underlined with the *Throws Pillow at God".... Simple, but twisted, so it can be understood in a metaphorical sense as well. Best Poem i have read so far!!!! Kind regards from Kane

very nice poem "Throw pillow at God" that was neato lol

Good jobz

loved it

-Josiah

I enjoyed this poem very much!