by Kane Burden
Hmmm.. great poem, but feel it ended a little early ;/ as if you started the poem, but rushed to finish it... Kind regards from Kane |
Very descriptive and very well thought out. Love how you used such imagery and it peaked my curosity (or however you spell it... man I can't write today) of how you placed every single word to make it feel like that word belonged in that sentance. Great job ^_^x |
this poem was well thought out as red tears of the soul said for one of your first poems its pretty darn good!! |
If it seems a bit rushed...that's because this is only one part from a two page poem that was for my poetry class...it was a poem about poems and there was supposed to be three tiny poems in it...but mine weren't so short so yeah...it's from a super long poem...this is the only part I liked from it. |
by Dark Savior
I don't know if you meant it to be a metaphore or i am just reading too much into it. I think it is amazing and it is definately YOUR BEST PEICE. I can honestly say that without having to lie or do anything about it. If the metaphore is true then this poem is truely outstanding. |
by Alyssa
Beautiful imagery |