hey i dont know what it is liek but my step dad is adopted. but if you liek to talk to some one i a m here for you i also have a friend who was it's hard on her too.. hugs to you and hope everything gets better 5/5

Wonderful poem. I really like this line :

"Building a wall impossible to crumble,
So determined in her mind to never stumble."

It kinda describes the fact that no matter how many people have given up on you and abandoned you, your going to prove them wrong and show them that you can make it. And thats a good quality to have. Great job.

Take Care,
Renee

Very good job on this poem. Just know I'm here if you ever want to talk. Great job!