Sometimes

by Danielle   Jul 20, 2005


I sometimes think about you
I wonder where you are
And as the sun's rays fill the sky
I know you’re not too far
The wrinkle of your nose
And the sparkle in your eyes
The hopes and dreams you had
The tears that you have cried
I sometimes think about you
I wonder how u got there
And as I feel the ocean breeze
I know you’re in the air
The perfect white smile
And this heart of gold
The years n' times we shared
The sweet nothings you've told
I sometimes think about you
In hopes you think of me
As I wander around this earth
Your arms is where I long to be
The chestnut sky slowly changes
As clouds fill the hole
My stomach aches with hatred
It’s something I can’t control
I sometimes think about you
When I’m in bed at night
wishing you were there
On every star in sight
Yeah, I sometimes think about you
And I wonder where you are
In the heavens looking down
Watching from every blazing star
yeah, I sometimes think about you
As I watch with so much joy
Watching you in his eyes
Of our beautiful baby boy

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Firstly, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, Beat Gravity.

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, it had a great flow and the narrative was both emotional and detailed. On the second read I felt that the use of "watch" towards the end became a little repetitive (three times in 5 lines) which detracted from the build-up to a conclusion. I'm not knocking it though: this was a worthwhile read, and I will be checking your other work out.

  • 19 years ago

    by Daniel Hendrix

    Wow i realy like this poem its sad but it feels like good feelsins are trying to come out beeing pushed back by the lose of what made you feel good the discussion thing pared every one off i hope you like what i do and if you dont care about the paring thing its what ever good poem though

  • 19 years ago

    by Rolo

    I've always been a fan of your work. You portray life in such a beautiful manner. All I can tell you is that you haven't lost your touch. Very nice job...keep it up.

    ~rolo

  • 19 years ago

    by Romy Rose

    nice ;)
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