Loving it luski... keep up the wonderful work my daring.....

nice poem i like it you did a nice job 5/5 keep it up and thanks so much for you comment

wow. that's really beautiful. you're a great poet.

superb poem! great words, really effective! 5/5

love mark xxx

really excellent poem!

AMAZING POEM!!! that was brill, i loved the way you described it and the imagery was great and really powerful and it's made me ramble! :D WOW!!! fantabulous. definately 5/5. keep it up lucyfer.

~madfry~
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Why can't we study your poetry at school? it's so much better that Seamus Heaney's and Walt Whitman's an Gillian Clarke's *hides from famous poets*. hmph. i think we should. dont kick me for commenting twice. i am forgetful and have alot to say, bad combination. :D

That was a work of art =)
Complete 5 out of 5
You really know how to place your words
Keep up the good work
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I think this one has to be my favourite so far! I like the ongoing theme of alcohol and the idea of being drunk on the glory and the imagery is fantastic! And it's not morbid Lu!!!!!!! :O

I think u are really good at creating and writing poems...

wow! we have more or less the same style, not to mention almost the same name!

one word BEAUTIFUL~!!! 5/5 nice word choice and rhyming 2!

Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job

Euh....ach, not fair. I wish I could write like that.
It's gorgeous. I love the imagery and the idea of wine. And the rhymes don't make it singsong! Good job!

Thats beauitful, i like the use of those big words and i think its awesome that you give definitions

That was a very nice poem, great read. ciao~lyn

Wow it was beautiful! i love your choice of words and rhyming etc. thanks for putting the like translations at the end!!!! love it, keep it up
Polly ~X~

Wow... some people most definatly don't know how to judge a good poem, its only a 4.4 rating!? wow.. it should be a 5.0! its such a great poem, such big words but not too bad that you can't understand it, i'm amazed, i can't believe that you were capable of writing such a great poem, great job, 5/5

Wow, this poem is brilliant! I felt all the greatness of the night in it, great job! keep it up!
weeping wolf

WOW!!! well done for winning the contest lucy!!!! this is an absolutely brilliant poem, and you deserve the recognition! i absolutely stand by what i said when i said we should study your stuff at school, or sixthform as it will be in 2 weeks...keep writing, for as long as i live you will always have somebody who loves your poetry!!!

~Madfry~
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