I liked this poem alot it's different but it's really good |
You're a poet...you don't have to be clear...possibly the confusion in your head came out on paper...or you know what you're talking about, and it just seems a little confusing to your readers...anyway, beautiful work ;) |
by Weeping Wolf
no...not confusing...only different, but thats perfectly fine because thats how poets can be! I absolutly loovvveee this one! i know what you mean by "call of the wild.." like...u want love but something else is pulling u into greater depths..well i dont really know what it is yet..oh well, fantastic poem anyways, ttyl. |
by Eden
Not confusing at all...or maybe it has many meanings. It reminds me of a certain circumstance that I so happen to be in at the present time...so it was a very pleasant and awakening read. Thank you for your comment on my latest poem. I appreciate it very much. I do not get on quite as often I used to, because I am without a computer for now...I used to get online everyday. Now I am reduced to once, maybe twice, a week. So I will get on again soon. I have many new poems that I haven't had the time to enter yet. But thanks again for your comment. And this poem was awesome. It really moved me. Tata |