I think you may have over done the so crisp so clear. If you lowered the number of that line repeated and added some details in it would sound and flow so much better. Though I love "so crisp so clear" describing a couples relationship and love. :)

Good Poem...i think you mentioned "so crisp so clear" too many times lol...but still very good

interesting... but it was good. 5/5

pretty cool. Different than most love poems that rhyme on here. I like that.

nicely written. different in style but in a good way. keep it up!

love it

Awwl.. short but very sweet! I absolutely loved it.. great rhyming 5/5! keep it up.

I love that...and I love green eyes too...but, yeah, lovely poem. :)

xxx

Very interesting writing....short but to the point nice job!! thanks for commenting on my poems...luv yas mwah

-kayla-