really nice poem

Love it :) Flows ever so nicely...

One tiny suggestion:

"But i am the master of my fate
I control my soul. "

I think it might be better as "But i am the master of my fate,
Controller of my soul.

*shrugs* Thanks again for commenting ;)

xxx

See, metaphors...You're an awesome writer and you see things for what they are! Keep it up! I've read all of them! lolz! Happy thoughts!
~ * Mandi * ~

Damnn!! that was AMAZING...Keep it up!! The end rocked the most...."But I am the master of my fate....The user of my soul" Perfect

Great write ! The idea of feeling like a computer is remarkable.

Lots of love
Sabine