that gave me shivers mate...that was awesome

hey, im sorry for wat your goin through it must b really hard and horrible ...
i hope your ok, i'll b thinkn of you!
xox SaM

i lloved your poem but just dont kill your self plz

Wow... thats deep. Im sorry about all this, my family used to go through this, but i never turned to cutting!! Because i knew my grandad was watching over me, and he gave me strength.
Hayley-Ree xxx

Wow, it really is incredible. I use to be a cutter and can relate so badly. Brilliant!

reali reali good poem reali lik it xoxox

wow!!!! i can realte to this so much thanks its helped me
x

If thats true you should kill your dad not yourself.

wow-that is really sad. i've been thru alot fo b.s. but never hae i been abused by a family member. i may not under stand a 100% but i feel for you. Stay strong!!!!i hope things start looking up for you.

aww your poem is so good...but sad but thats ok becus your expressing yourself...please hold on i no yu have hear that from like everyone but its true..things will turn around for you..and they will be good things...you dont diserve that...no one does...and it doent matter you cut thats ok...just dont kill yourself your not weak like that...i have been through a lot...some and more of what you ahve been through and so many times i have wanted and tried to kill myself but its not worth it...death cant be...i fyou need someone to talk to im here...kk well im out keep writting!!!!péace out chicka

That story is very touching. I nonly hope that you will find strength in the mist of all this drama. Thank you for sharing this. Feel free to read my poem All of Me.

awwwww......thats so sad! just dun kill urself b/c u will get out of there and then u'll never hav 2 c them again....stay strong
ur not alone

u did a great job writing! 5/5 keep it up

aww.. this is reli sad n heartbreaking.. no1s life shud be lyk this.. am sorry ur reli goin thru it all.. i loved ur choice of words and how ir rhymed.. im full of respect for u coz u had the courage to talk about it n post it up..
i loved it.. i hope u work things out..
take care
nouna

ur poem was so descriptive, it made me feel ur pain. i hope everything works out for u. hang in there and stay strong. *Hugs*
much love,
india

UGH! MY STUPID COMPUTER WON'T LET ME VOTE!!! But, if it did I would've given you a 5/5 because it was a really good story, and it kinda explained me. I hope this isn't happening to you, but if it is you can alwayz email me
Asian Luv Alwayz

Great Poem! Keep Up The Good Work!

That was an awesome poem!!really intense. Your a GREAT writer, keep up tha work!!!
love,
Jen

this was a really great poem.. i have went through the same thing when i was younger with my dad hitting me.. its really great!! keep it up

I can relate to this to a degree. I have a family who pays me no attention and shows me no affection. My brother abuses me and my parents know, they don't give a damn though.
I used to cut but i haven't for awhile. everytime they used to hurt me i'd cut and cut and cut but i decided that i had enough pain and didn't need to add any myself so thats why i decided to stop. if you need any one to talk to feel free to email me at souper_girl@hotmail.com
Good poem but you don't need to hide your pain. Love Sammi Morris xxx

wow this is a really good poem i felt it inside!! umm...well im off bye