thats such a good poem i rate it a 5 keep up the good work and cant wait to read more of your poems :-)

It was absolutely breath taking. I could feel my heart beating louder in my chest as I read each passing line. You are truly gifted and I'm happy for you that you were able to get your story out. I have no idea how hard it must be for you to suffer like this, but I hope one day you will break free of this confusion and abuse. You are loved by so many people, people you don't know even exist. But many people would miss you if you were ever to leave us.
Luv always, KT

nice poem....although there are some spelling errors...i still love it...keep it up:D

w0w... this is sooo good! but its so unbilevibly sad... :( i really hope ur ok!!!!!! i mean i dont go though that everyday but... lol everyother day i may... or at least it seems like it... well 5/5 i loved it! and if u want e-mail me! iwilllovehim4ever18@yahoo.com

that was really good...very well written yet a very sad poem. im so sorry that things at home are like that for you. please stay strong and take care. your an amazing writer
liv x

wicked poem..i sort of know how you feel cause i wake up everyday and all i can hear is yelling cause ever sence my dad died my famliy just hasnt been the same..its falling apart with out him and its getting hard to live with
Great poem keep up the wicked work!!

Kaylee

WoW!!! nice poem n it seems like i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level of writing.

Plz can u read some of ma poems coz i need some advices to be better.

that is a really amazing poem.. can u please comment on one of mine x

Wow. I'm very impressed. I love the flow and the idea of this poem. Great job. 5/5

.Savannah.

Woah that was so good..so much emotion! wow def. a 5/5 on that!

Your poems are disturbing but they are deep.

Wonderful!
You're a very telented person.
Keep writing!
XoX
A-T.

A very sad poem, i enjoyed it, i always believed that sad poems were the best and you reminded me that.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Excellent poem. Your words paiinted a picture in my head. It was beautifully written. i like your style of writing. keep up the good work

So great poem! Love it! ;_;