Aww, that made me cry...Oh my gosh that is so exactly what I feel...wow...lol, i'm crying...lol...That was amazing, girl!

You might want to consider breaking it into stanza's and work on the rhythm a little, there's always room for improvment, but oh my gosh you are so good!! Never stop writing, I mean it, you could go somewhere with this. KIU!!
*tears*
xoxo-Sierra Rae