Thank you so much and I surely will keep my head up:p

-Josiah

aww great job...you are really good at expressing yourself through your poetry...keep up the great work and thanks for the comment.

Good Job !!

Thank you both =)

-Josiah

Thank you for the comments :)

"To what my friends said
but all she did was mess with my head
all she wanted was me in bed
all I wanted was to be loved"

^It's really interesting hearing that coming from a guy...usually it's the other way around...it's terrible how she used you (assuming it's true)...but still wonderful to know there are guys that want love more than sex..."all I wanted was to be loved" - and you deserve someone who'll return your love and not use you like a toy... Excellent poem.

xxx

thank you what was said is true

Your welcome for you comments/Rates and thank you for mine!
-Josiah

Wow. I never thought I would hear a guy say "but all she did was mess with my head
all she wanted was me in bed
all I wanted was to be loved" It makes me happy to know that not all guys are as bad as the ones I've encountered. This was an awesome poem. Keep Writing.

wow that was really good!
thankx for your comments...
x0x0

thank 4 the comment on mine poem i love your good job

its ok nothing great tho

I loved this poem, it was very sad though. The rhyming was near perfect and it flowed so well. Your very talented. Keep up the great work ღ

Wow, This is deffinatly a first for me. A good one at that. This poem would be, uhmm okey coming from a girl, I mean you hear it all the time (message wise the scheme and rhyme was great!) But hearing it from a guy just gives it just so much more. Amazing, You have an increible talent, keep up the great work!
Love Always
Allison

dats really good

Aww hun, thats just so sad. But dont put yourself through pain because of that girl. Just learn for next time, but also, dont be afraid to ever let someone in again cuz of what happened. Think about it this way: some day you will meet the girl of your dreams... and the girl who hurt you will stay all alone, and in the end, you will be happy and she will regret what she did to all you guys cuz everyone will have left her. So keep your head up and try to love again, besides everything happens for a reason...

Ana*

I'm really sorry..i could not finish this poem. it was too dificult to read.

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