great poem i can relate totaly. keep writing
xoxo samara

LOVED YOUR POEM. ITS REALLY NICE, SEE IF YOU CAN CHECK MINES AND COMMENT ON THEM OK...

LOVE ALWAYS,
JACQUELINE a.k.a shorty

sweet dedication.. bittersweet somehow.. i lovd it.. and once again, ur rhyme never fails u... i think its ur trademark or smthn.. ur words are very powerful however simple they may seem..
keep up the love
nouna