good job I like it and what your trying to say

keep up the good work

-Josiah

You could feel the passion just raining down on you in this one...great!!!

--Nick--

This one puts it all away...5/5

The more poems i read from u it gets better and better and better This is an awesome poem!! make more

I like the beginning part (as well as the rest) but mostly the beginning! ^^ Good job!

-Taylor

Omg.. this poem.. is wow.. :-O this is .. im serious... the best poem i ever read ... seriously... wow. its well written i couldn't possibly use that vocabulary lol and its soo vivid and i can actually feel what your sayin in that poem.. you did a FRICKEN AMAZING JOB... wow.. you have ALOT of talent im not being sarcastic...wow.. i cant get over it.. i really got to shut up now but i cant you did a amazing job....

-mike....wow

Very good poem! You did a great job!

I dont actually know what to say - the topic is shocking and sad yet the poem is brilliant written. I admit the flow wasnt 100% perfect but it was definitely 99.9% perfect and I think you one spelling error in the first/sencond stanza where you wrote has since lone gone - I percieved that as long please correct me I'm wrong. However in general it's a nice poem and your natural talent just shines through.