My best friend died

by Mississippigirl08   Jul 21, 2005


My best friend died today...
now i feel so alone.
life is so meaningless without someone to love.
my best friend died today...
i could hear her heart go out.
i was there holding her hand.
in the end she knew i loved her.
my best friend died today....
i heard the sirens wailing
i heard her heart failing
i saw them take her away.
my best friend died today..........
i killed her!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by kevins365

    Very powerful writing. I just lost my best friend and I really miss him. He died in January and his service isn't until July. So far I don't feel any closure in his departing.
    More friends will come along, but none can replace the shoes of your very best friend. Hang in there and I pray God will help you through the hard times!

  • 19 years ago

    by Juls

    Wow I wasnt expeating the last line!!
    I was good though. Well adding u to my favs. please keep it up hun and if u want to talk to any1 Im here

  • 19 years ago

    by Some Random Human

    Interesting, to say the least...

  • 19 years ago

    by dArKgOtHiCgIrL

    wow that was really good. sad. keep up the good work ur a really good writer