Notice me

by Emma   Jul 21, 2005


Do you notice me when i cry?
Do you notice me when i where black?
Do you notice me when i am all alone?
Do you notice me when i get high?
Do you notice me when i cut?
Do you notice me,
or do i have to do an extreme before you notice me.

pleaz comment and vote. thax.

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  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    good poem, allthough it seemed more like u ust wrote down how you were feeling. it had no rhythem to it at all. but the meaning of it means alot and is relateable so 5/5
    PaUlEtTe

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    i gave it a 4...b/c i love how i can relate to how you feel and how you wrote it...but its not exactly a poem...and dosnt hav a form

  • 19 years ago

    by Anni

    I know the feeling^^

  • 19 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    Good poem, your last line dosent seem to fit though, maybe re-wording it, because it speeks the point beutifuly, however dosent fit right. Your style is very good. unique, keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    You are noticed Emma. With talent like this its hard not to. Kind regards from kane

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