Proposal~

by Loneliness Is A State Of Mind   Jul 21, 2005


Theres so much things to say about you,
even though I don't know you well.
But let me reassure you baby,
I instantly fell for your spell.

You may think I'm doing this for fun,
but its cuz I cant resist you.
I promise you you're my only one,
no matter what I'll always assist you.

Girl my love for you is undying,
just look at you-you're perfect.
I'd do whatever you want me to,
cuz if its for you, its worth it.

But really what I'm getting at,
is to explain how I deeply feel.
And I know you love me too,
I can assure you this isn't surreal.

I just love you more than I can say,
especially the way your hair glows.
So as I'm down on my knees now,
I ask, will you marry me, Rose?

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This poem is dedicated to Undying Blusher. Will you marry me babe? =D

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I just came back to read it again...and it made me smile. thanks :)

    *blows kiss*

  • It does make more sense, but its too trendy and everyone uses lines like that in their poems, thats why I didnt use it =P. But I wrote this in a few mins anyways XD

  • 19 years ago

    by natalie

    Oh thats lovely, although it might be better to say, I can assure you this is real., as i think tht makes more sense (possibly) ignore me if im wrong :D.

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Well now I can't refuse! How could I say no after reading that? Beautiful...

    Thanks hon ;)

    xxxx

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