Shot Down

by Jack   Jul 21, 2005


You feel alone, gone within the world, like nothing will ever perk you up again.
This lonely desperate feeling that no one understands.
The feeling of being separated from what you want,
when all you want, is to be wanted.
Shot down by a girl who doesn't want you.
Makes your heart break in two,
for all he wanted to do,
was just to have one date with you.
He got shot down cause you were just to good.
He got shot down cause you were not into him.
Though he was crazy about you,
you shot him down and made him go pout.
Crying in his room in his bath robe,
did he ever come out nobody knows.

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  • 19 years ago

    by samara

    great poem!
    xoxo samara

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Nice poem. I liked it. Feel sorry for the guy in the bathroom though. I would date him ^_~.