by Michael Jul 21, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
In the morning of the day, |
In my opinion, you succeeded...doesn't seem dark to me...and it's very interesting how you fit in all those elements and some of your own...very unique and well done poem...I do like it. |
by Fig
hmmmm..interesting poem. i like it. youve used some really goos expressive language. very good indeed in my opinion. and for a fairly long poem its not boring. |
by Michael
Ok, this is suppost to be a non-dark poem. I tried so hard and this is all I get...naturally...this is a disaster. Naturally, its suppost to be about average days. I did this because I;m a witch and we stick to elements. (There is suppost to be 5 elements[ Spirit, Fire, Earth, Water and Wind] but I added some of my elements) But its all up to u. Tell me how u liked it. |