Yeah... i think we all learn to embrace the natural numbness sooner or later. very nicely made.
-A

a wonderful poem. A lot of hard emotions, its great to write things like this down. But I hope you aren't really like this. If there are people willing to help you I don't understand why you would push them away. Would you rather save a friend if given the chance? Or let them die? don't do that to yourself. You have a chance to save yourself. don't let yourself die.

Take Care,
Renee

I pray this is not really how you're feeling!! Hope all is well!!!!

You writing is so unique and I've enjoyed every one I've read though for me this one stands out. It's so emotional! It's just breath taking - it flowed wonderfully and definitely was loud and clear! You really have portrayed your feelings to the reader! Excellent write!! :) Take Care!

absolutely fantabulous!! greatly written.. goes straight to the heart.. nice rhyme.. help me out here, im comin up short of words.. reli gr8..
take care
nouna

I can feel your pain as you express it in this work. I know that feeling of numbness and know how you feel. Beautiful piece.

I like it, i love the imagery of it. Perhaps the lines starting with numb is...etc should be spaced out on their own, not joined to the paragragh thingy before. It might read better. xxx

*tear* Sadly, I can relate to that...beautifully written...man, I still have tons of yours I haven't read yet...I'll get to them all eventually...

And thanks for mentioning me at the end of your profile thing...that was very kind of you :)

xxx

5/5

Amazing, I love this poem...It's so emotional and very touching!!! I relate so much!!! Hope that you are ok???Very beautifully written, perfect flow and rhyming...

*Hugs sabrina*