Aww...the blue rose again...lovely flow to it...this one is beautiful as well :) |
So sweet..Loved it |
I know the poem is called describing your beauty, but you used beauty and beautiful 12 times in all out of 18 lines. If you are using microsoft word then right click on the word and you can look up a different word in the thesaraus cause putting one word in your writing too much will also bog it down and make it sound repetitive |
by xAmx
Ooooo! This poem is so romantic and beautiful!! I love it! I give you a 5/5. Keep up the good work. |
Beautiful tribute!!! |