I absolutely love that...I really relate to the poem...down to details as the "hazel green eyes." Wonderfully written...I hope I can have an ending like the one wrote...Beautiful! :)

xxx

Pretty good story. It is better to put it into a story like this than to write specefic experiences cause it gets more people who can relate.

OMG great work!!!!!! im speachless..... thou just so u kno....we are mostly a bunch of teenagers here lol....so dont expect too much valulable feedback,..or to find much poetry worthy of u... take care...

*~peace and love~*

Beautiful and emotional. Very touching. Wonderful write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

hey, it was so wonderful and it had a good flow too. nice job. 10/5
take care,
marjan