wow i love it! such a beautyful imgae even though it is a toad. a perfect example of a great haiku.

this is not a haiku. the first line should have 5 syllables, and the 2nd and third line should have 7 and 5 syllables respectivley. nice try, though.

Keri,

I stand corrected, there should be the relevant 5-7-5 count now. Take care.

regards,

Steve

Mike,

The frog is used often in poems and I felt sorry for the old toad so used him in mine. Thanks for the comments, appreciated.

Regards,

Steve

Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job