by MEG!@$% Jul 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
When I look into your eyes |
That was awesome. 5/5. I Dont really have an idea for the title though. I think you should add more lines before the last four lines to make it a bit longer. Awesome job. Thanks for the comments you made on my poems. As long as you comment on mine, I'll do the same for you. |
by blood4love
how about...me for u?u for me?well anyways i like it!sounds good!Plz check out mine |