by Kane Burden Jul 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Words once spoken |
Very lyrically written that in such a way this makes your poem unique from all the other love poems about lost love. I also like the constant form, the second stanza is my favourite. |
by Ana Vidovic
I loove this poem. It is so metaphorical and shows a high degree of passion! Amazingly well written! |
by emily claire
wow i really liked it...it reminds me of my life and i can relate to this poem alot! very nice job....keep writing u have a good talent! |
by Torn
hey really good... can relate exactly..except a guy ran away with my best friend:S but same idea!! |
wow...beautiful!!! i love when you say |