by Dark Kitten Jul 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
A whisper in the wind, |
I liked the connection between realism and unreality here, you used it very well. The vocabulary was very clear, too. Neat work. |
by Cindy
Excellent job! You write with such a passion. |
by Rachel RTVW
Nice imagery in this one. Nice job. |
WOW! I absolutely loved this. I loved the way you were talking about a real date and the dream word at the same time, it was beautiful. The words you used were so fresh and not many people use such a wide vocabulary in their poetry, which made it so much more fun to read. Great work. |
by Tara Kay
That was really good, it wsas long and took me some time to read properly but once i had read it over, i really enjoyed it. |