WOW THAT IZ A GD POEM IT BROUGHT TEARS IN MY EYES PLZ CAN U VOTE N COMMENT ON MINE KEEP UP THE GD WORK TAKE CARE XX

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wow amazing poem..great work..and i'm really sorry to hear bout this...just keep your head up high and stay strong...everything will get better

awwwwww.........that is just so sad. does it really have to be a true story? v.v

Well done. Very touching with how the word choice and flow came together to bring out how good this was. It was also very sad. Very emotional write.
~FotF

no one, i repeat, no one can argue with words of the heart.. no matter how bad(or gud) u are, the words u write with ur heart are the most truthful, most honest, and the most beautiful words of all(even if it brings u 2 tears).. and thats wat makes a gud, even gr8, poem.. ur poem DEEPLY touched my heart.. its nothin short of a heartfelt amazing piece..
am so sorry this is a true story, and am sorry 4 ur loss.. death in no temporary escape, and its losses are devastating.. but plz hang in ther.. ther r more things to life.. and u noe ur frends and family will always be ther 4 u..
it brought me 2 tears.. one thing i reli lyk more than a frend who can make me laugh, is a poet who can make me cry..
take care n GOD bless..
nouna
p.s. r u reli 15?? lol

Awww omg this is soooooo sad, I'm sorry to hear that. I love it, it was well written. I gave you a 5 to boost the score up a bit.

Omg this really did make me cry and that does happen too often. You have tremendous talent my friend. Keep it up.
-A

o pickles...that was an amazing write...it put me to tears! 5\5 for sure...keep it up.
wuvz
bubbles

very well written. and it's so sad. keep writing!
crystal

aw, so sad! im soooo sorry that happened to you :(

omg i love that poem!!!! i love the way you said like he was everything to you-A father,a brother,a son and all that!!!! i really enjoyed reading it!!! plez write more

I love the words 'jason just adored you' I know that its a quote but you used it so well and it just added to the beauty of this poem
I'm so sorry for your loss
I can't believe you're only 15 either, your words hold huge maturity
keep it up you're a great poet
xx
5/5
x

Aw, thats really beautiful. I absolutely love the last two lines the best! I'm so sorry for your loss:(

Ana*

Omigosh!! This is soo sad! I want to cry!! =( good writing, though!

Take Care
CK♥

This is so sad.. im reli sorry for ur loss.. death is never easy, but its never at the wrong time.. i believe all of us have our time to live on this earth and all that matters is that we live it to the fullest.. and wen someone's gone, we cud just pray and know that he is in heaven, smiling down on us, watching over us.. ur poem was reli heart-breaking.. u rymed well and ur words wer obviously deep from ur heart. its true, real moments and experiences are wat make a person..
take care
stay strong
NannO