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by SuperJenius   Jul 21, 2005


I feel so alone i feel so hated i feel so let down you're overrated

you always thought that I'd never leave you that we'd always be together well you pushed me to the edge so now you know that promises don't last forever

so forget you and my life forget the idea of me ever being your wife

you beat me to the ground then kicked when i was still down now you expected me to stick around ?

to deal with your acts i take my friend , Razor knows his role he knows how to behave

after a while i forget all your hate and become conscience of the sting and burn of Razor on my arm

So just a few more and I'll be a little better only 20 more and I'll stay here one day closer to forever

i just reached # 19 next is # 20
my hand has just slipped , Razor fell in to deep , this cut is a gash one that till eternity i shall keep

~~** i tried something new ; let me know what you think **~~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mike

    !!!!!!!!!!! THATS HOTT!!!!!!! THAT A HOTT POEM!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    i dont like the way the lines are set up, but other than that its a great poem! keep writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    ps: thanks for the comments!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Its not your best work...

    --Nick--

  • 19 years ago

    by Kendall

    nice, i liked the style, and the combination of words seemed to all fall into place. great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    very good beginning. the rhyming was good too.
    take care,
    marjan