by SuperJenius Jul 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I feel so alone i feel so hated i feel so let down you're overrated |
by Mike
!!!!!!!!!!! THATS HOTT!!!!!!! THAT A HOTT POEM!!! |
by AntiSocial16
i dont like the way the lines are set up, but other than that its a great poem! keep writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy! |
Its not your best work... |
by Kendall
nice, i liked the style, and the combination of words seemed to all fall into place. great job! |
by Marjan
very good beginning. the rhyming was good too. |