please comment. first song i've witten. do u think that i should turn it into a poem or keep it a song? thanx.

that was really good.. you've got real great skills! keep it up 5/5

much love,
Jamie

Hi aaron! Really a good job you did! I see other people here like it too! i think you should keep it in a song, i wish i could hear you sing it! :) lol
You certainly got a 5 from me! Keep on the good lyrics and poems
milou

LOVING IT

Great Aaron! Keep up the good work and don't stop writing. Check out my poems sometimes if you want. I wished a guy would write a poem for me but the guys I end up going out with don't write me anything. Well good job, and keep up the good work.

Love,
Kayla a.k.a. Kala

you wrote that? I think it's beautiful. Definitely keep it a song. keep writing! take care.