sad poem.. but gr8.. lovd the way u conveyed the emotion.. gud use of words.. well-written...
keep it up
thnx 4 ur comment
nouna

Nice...cool

It's sad, and I'm sure more people feel the same way as the poem at times too. Good stuff.

Sorry it took so long 4 me to return the favor...but anyway, this was sweet
i liked it alot...it deserves a 5