by Dark Kitten Jul 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I wonder alone through endless sorrow...... |
by PS
Very nice. i realy like this line: A small beam of light within the darkness, |
by Sole
Great ending - the repetition throught the poem really gives power to the last line, in past tense instead of present. |
I like your use of ellipses, it really had drive....but not my kind of poem again...still it was very well written... |
by LadyPearl
Nice poem, not my usual style. Keep it up |
by Simon Hayes
This is great! Very original. I liked the way you show finding a path! Great... Loved it! |